JAMIE
NOAH
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P.S. This playlist is a little wilder than the last. Beware. :D
ON MY MIND PART 3 PLAYLIST: TROUBLE MAKERS
Coma Complacency - Japandroids
Sovereignty- Japandroids
Quiet Little Voices - We Were Promised Jetpacks (AWESOME!!!!!)
Glitter and Gold - Cheap Time
Wet Hair - Japandroids
Kill the Director - The Wombats
Go There - Embarrassing Fruits
Strange Desire - The Black Keys
Guitars - Red Collar
Backed Out On The Cause - Kevin Drew
North - Phoenix
Another Number - The Cribs
Sometimes in the Fall - Phoenix
My Life Flashed Before My Eyes - The Cribs
Lazerwalker - The Delgados
ON MY MIND (PART 3)
~~~~~~~
Noah parked the truck in front of the house and cut the
engine. Jamie had become quieter the
closer they came to their destination and Noah knew he was replaying Dee
Pierson’s words in his head. Jamie was
scared but Noah knew he wouldn’t admit it.
Instead of trying to pry words from Jamie’s mouth, Noah unbuckled his seatbelt
and leaned over. His lips brushed
Jamie’s cheek before his hands found their other half. “I promise you everything
is gonna be alright Jamie. She ain’t mad
at ya. More like she’s mad at herself
for what she done said to you. Please
come inside.”
Staring out his window, Jamie felt Noah’s lips reassure him
but he couldn’t shake the foreboding feeling in the pit of stomach. First Jerry showed up, then Jamie had yelled
at Noah, and now he was expected to walk into Dee’s house like everything was
alright? Someday this was turning out to be huh? But Jamie was a grown man and
if he was going to be any good in this thing with Noah, he needed to start
acting like one. Turning to Noah, Jamie
palmed the man’s cheek and kissed him. “Okay,” Jamie whispered pulling back to
look the country boy in the eye. “Let’s
go inside.”
“Yeah?” Noah slowly grinned.
“You sure?” Secretly excited to have Jamie staying at his house, Noah
hooked his leg over Jamie’s lap before he opened the passenger door and kissed
Jamie. Lingering for only a few seconds
to get Jamie all riled up, Noah quickly jumped out the passenger side and
winked.
“Oh yeah?” Jamie bit his lip and eyed Noah up and down.
“Yeah,” Noah put his hands on the door frame and leaned
in. He slowly kissed Jamie and the
blonde reciprocated with his hands threading into Noah’s hair.
“Will ya’ll do that somewhere that granny can’t watch?
Jesus!” Mason slammed the screen door open and crossed his arms. Sure enough granny Ella Mae was peeking
through the front window with wide eyes and a stupid smile. “I mean…I know
ya’ll are…whatever but c’mon now.”
“What? You don’t like this?” Noah laughed and kissed Jamie
again, even though the city boy was embarrassed and tried pushing against
Noah’s chest.
“Noah!” Mason squeaked.
“Ma-son,” Noah mocked back and pulled Jamie out of the
truck.
Jamie squirmed a little under Mason’s gaze and wondered if
the guy disapproved of his brother’s sexuality.
He didn’t want to make things worse for the Pierson family and would
just assume stay out in the barn rather than in Noah’s room if it was going to
cause a problem. Pulling his hand from
Noah’s, he crossed his arms over his chest.
Noah screwed his brows together and eyed Jamie. “Do I have cooties or somethin?”
“No,” Jamie said softly. “I just don’t think we should
uh…make a big show in front of your family.
We’re not sure what we are anyway.
So we don’t have to overdo this.”
“Jamie, look at me.” Noah stepped close and rolled his eyes
with a laugh. “You already done made a show out of us and everybody already
knows who you belong to. So if you need
me to tell you out here in the front yard while my family watches, then so be
it. Jamie Ford?” Noah grabbed Jamie’s
hands and fluttered his lashes teasingly. “Will you be my beau?”
“Noah, come on seriously.
This isn’t funny.” Jamie turned beet red and looked away as Ella Mae
waved at him in the window. Dee Pierson made an appearance behind her mother
and Jamie inhaled sharply.
“I was being
serious Ford. You do or you don’t,
simple as that. For the first time in
your life, stop thinking and just go with it.
I want you even though you drive me up the damn wall and have a way of
giving me a wrinkle a day but…I still
want you at the end of the day. I hope I haven’t made a fool of myself these
past few months and wasted my time on you…” Noah turned his head and grinned
while Jamie surely thought he was upset.
“Noah, I didn’t mean it like that. I just…oh fuck. Alright, alright. Do I need to sign something to make it
official or what?” Jamie sighed loudly and shook his head when Noah looked at
him with a big smile.
“Make it good. I want
Mason to blush for the next few days,” Noah purred and Jamie gave him a
confused look.
“Huh?” Jamie had only a second before Noah grabbed him
around the waist and kissed the ever loving shit out of him.
“Oh my God! Granny’s never gonna sleep now!” Mason groaned
and went inside to get Ella Mae to stop clapping and shut the curtains. Dee Pierson turned away from the picture
window and covered a small laugh with her hand.
She hadn’t seen that kind of Noah in a really long time and it seemed
she had a lot of apologizing to do where Jamie Ford was concerned. Because anyone that brought a smile out of
Noah like that, deserved her undying love, not her grief.
Ten minutes later, Jamie stood with a mortified expression
in front of a winking Ella Mae and Dee Pierson herself. “Mrs. Pierson, I am so sorry for the other
day…” Jamie looked at the ground but was cut off.
“You ain’t need to be sorry for nothin. I’m the one who’s sorry Jamie. I shouldn’t have said those things and maybe
some it was true in the beginning but I done talked to Merna and she says…well,
she says you’re like the son she never had.
That’s high praise from Miss Merna and those are words that I won’t
tread lightly upon again. If you like
kin to Miss Merna and you make my baby smile like that…” She pointed to Noah
who cleared his throat and looped his thumbs in his jean pockets with a
blush. “Then you and I will work out
just fine. That said, get on over here.” Dee gestured Jamie over and wrapped
her arms around the boy in a fierce hug.
Jamie slowly returned the hug because he wasn’t really
familiar with them. Merna had seemed
natural in a way that scared him but Dee Pierson scared him shitless. But as he
leaned into her tiny frame and wrapped his arms around her, the scent of
sunflowers and her hand rubbing up and down his back, made him want to
cry. He hadn’t had a hug that meant this
much to him since his dad. Jamie took a
deep breath and pulled away. Smiling at
him, Dee turned away with a squeeze to his hand and went into the kitchen. Mason sat down next to Ella Mae and flipped
on Family Feud for his granny.
“Mr. Harvey is so handsome,” Ella Mae shouted and Mason
jumped but laughed.
“I guess so granny.” Mason shook his head and waved Noah and
Jamie off.
“What’s an Augusto?” Ella Mae cupped her ear and squinted at
Mason.
Noah chuckled. “C’mon.”
Before he knew it, Jamie was being pulled down the hall. They walked up a flight of stairs towards the
back and Noah opened the first door off the landing.
“This is me,” Noah explained and walked inside. Jamie followed with a growing
apprehension. This was Noah’s private
space and he was here, just the two of them, and Noah was closing the door,
and… “Relax Jamie, you look ready to crawl out of your skin.”
He was, wasn’t he? Jamie looked up at Noah who shrugged and
went to sit on the bed. The room was
large but not too big, with coffee colored walls and a large soft looking bed
that resembled a big pillow. Jamie could
just imagine crawling onto it and sleeping for the next week with the weight of
the stress he was carrying. “Sorry,”
Jamie said with an exhale as he sat on the bed next to Noah.
“Will you stop apologizing for every little thing? You’ve had a rough day. Okay make that a rough summer, now that I
have all the facts. Why don’t you kick
back a minute and just breathe?” Noah flopped back on the bed and his shirt
rose up on his stomach. The brunette patted the bed and Jamie kicked his shoes
off with a yawn. “See? You don’t even
know how tired you are, do you? When’s
the last time you slept boy?”
Jamie shrugged because he couldn’t remember a full night’s
sleep. Reports, research, and maps had
filled his head until the wee hours of the morning and the rest of his time had
been spent stalking Noah. Now he didn’t
have to do either of those things but he did have a job to do—ridding Shermin
Heights of Jerry Hobbs. Stretching out next to Noah with their legs dangling
off the bed, Jamie looked at his new boyfriend and sighed. “I’m just worried about Jerry. Not about his well-being or anything,” Jamie
snorted and Noah snaked his arm under Jamie’s neck. “He thinks he owns me or something because my
mother belongs to him. Jerry was a sick
fuck from the beginning. Even my dad hated him when they had worked together,
but that didn’t stop him from moving in on a grieving widow. She ate up his lavish gifts and promises of
this or that. She just stopped caring
about my dad and then somewhere along the way…she stopped caring about me.”
Noah’s heart broke for Jamie but he just listened because he
had a feeling that’s what Jamie needed right now. Just to be heard for once. Noah ghosted his lips over Jamie’s cheek and
shifted on to his side to snake his arm around his boyfriend’s stomach. Jamie didn’t even flinch or shy away this
time. He relaxed into Noah because he
felt that he belonged here—in Noah Pierson’s arms, everything was okay.
“Nothing can ever just be easy for me Noah. Because of Jerry, these last few years have
been a game of follow the leader or hit the streets like the black sheep and he
knows it. When my dad was alive…shit…”
Jamie tried to hold back the tears. He
hated talking about his dad but he hated trying to forget him more. Noah pulled Jamie close and stroked his
hair. “He’s going to try like hell to
take your land from you. I didn’t even
try compared to what he’ll do Noah. I
was never cut out to be a shark like him.
I tried to be because I thought that’s what my dad would have wanted but
now I realize…”
“What?” Noah murmured.
“My dad was never like Jerry. Yeah he got what he needed but he’d have been
fair about it and no meant no to him. He
was a good man and the way Jerry runs the company is unsavory to put it
nicely. But, I’ll do what I have to so
that he’ll never touch your family’s land Noah.” Jamie propped up and grabbed
Noah’s face. “He’ll never get you.”
“He can’t have me anyway.” Noah lifted his face and kissed
Jamie. “I’m taken.”
“You know what I meant.” Jamie blushed but grinned and
straddled Noah.
“I know but I was just sayin. You ain’t got nothin to worry about now though
city boy. Jerry Hobbs just made his
debut at the top of the Shermin Height’s shit list. Word will get around and trust me when I say
that small towns stick together. What’s
mine is yours all that bull crap.”
“But they hate me,” Jamie said and closed his eyes as Noah
ran his calloused hands under Jamie’s shirt and along his bare chest.
“Nah, just consider it an audition that you passed. Since
day one they been watchin you and from what I heard, you fit in just fine.”
Noah groaned and tugged on Jamie’s shirt.
The blond lifted the shirt over his head and Noah whistled low. “Damn boy.
I don’t much care for the Yankee attitude but I sure do like this Yankee
body just fine.” With that he flipped Jamie over and peeled his own shirt off
his body. Equally matched in size, Noah paused and ran his hands over Jamie’s
chest before bending down and slowly working open Jamie’s mouth.
A hand wandered over Jamie’s growing bulge in his tight
jeans and Noah squeezed a little. Grinning
at the size in his hand, Noah filled out his own jeans and moved from Jamie’s
mouth down his neck. Small but delicious
kisses turned up the heat of Jamie’s skin—making the room grow smaller and his
eyes roll in ecstasy. His pants were pulled down and yanked off his ankles by
greedy hands. Noah licked his lips and
returned his mouth to Jamie’s stomach, moving his way lower to the blue briefs
that beckoned him closer. Blond curls
tickled his lips and Noah flicked his eyes up as he licked his way down to the
elastic band that created a barrier to the sensitive flesh that he wanted so
badly.
His patience wearing thin, Jamie hooked his thumbs in the
band of his briefs and pulled them down.
His erection bounced back and hit his stomach softly. With a chuckle and a certain bit of hunger, Noah
helped Jamie out and shucked the offending underwear off Jamie’s long legs
quickly. Tracing his palms back up
Jamie’s legs, Noah knelt between his boyfriend’s thighs and gave Jamie a small
flash of his eyes before he lowered his lips to the head of Jamie’s cock.
Like a ring of hot heaven, Jamie felt Noah’s lips surround
his cock and suckle him teasingly. The
texture of the country boy’s tongue flicked over the head and Jamie bucked on
the bed—his ass leaving the sheets in favor of driving his cock deeper into the
heat of Noah’s mouth. Noah was right
there with him, pushing Jamie back onto the bed with a few more inches added to
his rhythm. After a few minutes, Jamie
shook with a moan and Noah pulled off—squeezing Jamie’s balls a bit.
“Wha…why did you stop?” Jamie whined then went open mouthed
when Noah kneeled between his legs and slowly undid his own pants with hooded
eyes. The jeans came off and Jamie
groaned at the sight of Noah’s hard erection and the fact that he hadn’t worn
any underwear to begin with. Jamie had no idea where they were going from here
but he was set straight when Noah grabbed his hand and sucked a few fingers
into his mouth. Straddling Jamie’s waist, Noah rubbed his cock into the chest
underneath him and brought Jamie’s hands to his ass. “You want me to…I thought…are you sure?”
Jamie rotated his hips under Noah—his cock tracing the line between Noah’s ass
cheeks.
Noah bent down and kissed Jamie. “I ain’t thought about nothin else for the
past week. Now shut up and…” Jamie’s finger
found Noah’s sweet spot and he moaned. “Oh yeah, that’s it.”
Jamie didn’t question the opportunity he was
being given and began to loosen Noah up with his fingers before his own cock
got a mind of its own and did something stupid.
Working his ass against Jamie’s fingers, Noah planted his palms on
Jamie’s chest to spread his legs wider.
It felt too good to be real. He’d never thought this moment would happen
with Jamie but finally, here they were.
And truthfully it wasn’t all about the sex between them. That just
happened to be a really good benefit of this new
relationship between them. Letting Jamie take him like this
was a way that Noah opened himself up.
Like this he felt vulnerable, yet with Jamie, Noah felt equal and that’s
what he wanted.
He’d never liked the weaker partner, stronger partner kind
of roles. Noah figured you had to be
both to make things work and Jamie couldn’t have fit him more perfect in that
aspect even if he tried. Sending a silent
prayer of thanks to whoever was listening, Noah laid his chest on Jamie’s and
kissed him. He couldn’t get enough of
the soft lips against his and Jamie seemed to like kissing him just as
much. Despite his rough and tough
exterior, looking into Jamie’s eyes now, Noah felt something spark in his
heart—like he beautiful to the guy or some shit like that.
Just as he thought about pulling back, Jamie pushed a third
finger into Noah and bit down on his lower lip.
Noah gasped when Jamie pulled his fingers out and took a deep breath.
“You sure Noah?”
Finding his voice, Noah replied, “This ain’t my first rodeo
boy. Now you want me or not?” He grinned and stroked Jamie’s cock behind
him—slipping the length between his cheeks to glide up and down.
“Noah,” Jamie warned.
Any more of that and he wouldn’t last another minute. Noah’s cheeks were full but tight as they
hugged Jamie’s dick with a squeeze of his muscles. Fine, Jamie thought with a
grin of his own. Two can play at this
game, he concluded and wrapped his arms around Noah’s waist before rolling him
onto his back. “The past is the past but
from now on…I’m the only rodeo you better ever attend,” Jamie growled into
Noah’s mouth while pushing his legs wider.
“I want you so bad Noah. There
ain’t no one else for me but you.”
Noah moaned a laugh. “Hick,” he gasped at the look on
Jamie’s face.
“Ain’t no other hick do it like this,” Jamie replied with
his best Kentucky twang before he pushed inside of Noah.
“Ah, Jamie,” Noah hissed and pulled Jamie down to him. The curtains ruffled above them and blew away
from the window. A roll of thunder
rumbled in the distance and the smell of future rain filled the room. The swirling breeze ruffled Jamie’s hair as
he slowly made love to Noah. Underneath
Jamie, Noah felt every deliberate stroke, felt every breath on his neck and
face, and for the first time in a long time, got what he needed from another
man—love.
~~~~~~~
They’d fallen asleep before dinner and judging from the
light grey sky outside the window, Noah guessed right into the morning. Jamie’s head was snuggled close to Noah’s
neck with his body wrapped around Noah’s side like he was sort of human
koala. Kissing Jamie’s temple, Noah
rubbed his boyfriend’s back until he saw those sleepy eyes open a bit.
“Hmm,” Jamie grunted.
“Wakey, wakey,” Noah teased.
“Serious? I didn’t hear a rooster go off yet,” Jamied
snorted.
“Rooster? Boy, do you think you’re on a farm?” Noah laughed
and pushed Jamie onto his back. Jamie’s eyes opened and looked around after
being tossed about. “Think you’re some
kind of funny guy, you smart ass?”
“C’mon Noah, I’m so tired.
Let’s just lay here a little while longer,” Jamie groaned--letting his
head flop back onto the pillow.
“Nope. We got things to do today. You do remember our little visitors right?”
Noah winked and Jamie shot up into a sitting position. “Or now
you do I reckon.”
“Oh God, Noah I should call Merna. I just left her there to deal with them and
what if he’s trying to play her too. This
is such a mess,” Jamie groaned.
Noah smiled and pulled Jamie to his chest. “Hey now. None of that whinin. What did I tell you last night?”
Jamie tried to think past the warmth of Noah’s body and way
that tongue had moved over his lips—the way they had been so in sync with each
other’s bodies and thoughts. “Jamie?”
“Yeah, yeah small towns stick together. I heard you.
I can still worry though, can’t I?” Jamie sighed.
“No. If you worry
about him, then you’re just gonna get all down on yourself. We handle him together. We’re a team and don’t you forget it,” Noah
whispered, smoothing his hands over Jamie’s bare chest.
“Okay.” Jamie tried to turn around but Noah slipped his hand
under the covers and grabbed Jamie’s cock.
“Uh, I thought you said we had things to do today.”
“We do. And first on
the to-do list is you,” Noah rumbled and pushed Jamie onto his hands and
knees. Jamie’s eyes went wide and he
looked over his shoulder with a barely concealed smile. Noah winked and covered Jamie with his
body. “Good morning.” He kissed Jamie’s
neck and Noah felt him shiver.
“It’s turning out to be,” Jamie replied with a big smile.
~~~~~~~~~~
Noah and Jamie huddled on the side of Merna’s house with the
Olivette brothers and watched Jerry pace back and forth in the living
room. All the windows were open so they
could hear every word the man was screaming into his phone. “This is the second charger I’ve tried to
have delivered express this week! What do you mean you’ve sent them? I have personally been to the post office in
this God forsaken place three times and they don’t have a thing for me. I have an hour at the most left on my phone
and then I lose all my contacts and…”
Jerry’s face went red with anger and he hissed with rage. “I better
start writing them down? Do you know who you’re talking to you little
jerk! I’ll have your job…”
Noah looked to Sam and nodded. Sam Olivette pressed a button on the small
device they had grabbed from a Radio Shack an hour out of town. Jamie covered his mouth to keep from laughing
as Jerry paused and shook his phone and then put it back to his ear. All cell phone reception blocked as the
device lit up green.
“Hello? Hello! Hello? Oh come on!” Jerry screamed as Merna set
a plate of sandwiches and a bucket of beer out for the boys by corner of the
house with a wink and disappeared back into the house. “Miranda!” Jerry pointed a finger at Merna
who looked around with a snort.
“Ain’t no one named Miranda around these parts Mr. Hobbs.
It’s Merna.”
“Oh what the hell ever, have you gotten any packages for
me? I know you said you didn’t yesterday
but what about today?” Jerry wiped his
forehead and showed off the wet spots under his arms. “And for the love of God, turn on some air!
It’s hotter than the Amazon in here.”
“No, I haven’t gotten any packages for you and…” Merna
smiled with a wink. “We don’t have air here.”
“You what?” Jerry’s eyes bulged and Noah had to cover
Jamie’s mouth with both his hands to quiet him.
Perry Olivette turned the device off and they all listened as Jerry’s
phone began to ring—the phone company trying to call back no doubt. Just when Jerry went to answer it, Sam turned
the device on—cutting off the call. “Ahh!” Jerry threw the cell across the
room--covering his mouth as he realized what he’d done. “This damn place is hell on earth,” he grit
out. Turning from the window, Jerry
stormed out the front door and down the steps.
Upon reaching the last step, his loafers met a bottle’s worth of
vegetable oil and the fat pig went down.
Growling, Jerry pushed himself up with his hands and looked across the
street at a group of little old men who giggled and went back to reading their
papers.
“Oh, oh Jerry!” Karen got up from her chair on the porch and
clicked down the stairs before she realized the problem and slipped—falling
right on top of him.
Merna busted a gut right inside the front door and had to
wipe the tears from her eyes. Noah,
Jamie, and the boys plastered themselves to the side of the house and silently
died of laughter.
~~~~~~~
The next day, Karen was walking through the general store
like the place was made of cockroaches and snakes. She kept her purse close and gasped at every
little noise—keeping an eye on the two overall clad men behind the
counter. At the register, Clyde—the
manager--gave a thumbs up to the little boy with the juice box outside. The tiny blond ran around the corner and
nodded to Sam and Perry who grinned at each other. The boys hopped off their open truck bed and
carried their cooler inside.
The front bell rang and Karen jumped away from the open
drink cooler. She had been trying to figure out which dusty bottle of sparkling
water looked less offensive when two dangerous looking bumpkins walked in and
dropped an ice chest looking contraption on the counter.
“Afternoon, Sam.” Clyde nodded. His cousin George patted the
cooler. “Perry. Whatcha have today son?”
“A bit of this and that, you know. Real big ones though,” Sam exaggerated. “Had to hold em down while they
squirmed. This lot fought back real
hard. Almost snapped my wrist trying to
gut em.”
Karen’s heart stopped beating. I knew it, she balked, they’re murdering
hillbillies. She closed the cooler door
and slowly edged down the back aisle. No
matter which way she went, Karen would still have to go out the front door and
right past the group of backwoods predators. But hopefully she could scurry out
the door before they turned around.
Perry heard the sharp gasp from Mrs. Hobbs and fought to
keep a straight face as he cracked the cooler for dramatic effect. “Yeah between me and Sam we got us six of
them bastards. Thought they could get
away from us after all the trouble they put us through. Went through a rod or two in the process
too!” Perry shook his head with a laugh as he spotted Mrs. Hobbs getting closer
in the mirror above Clyde and George. Rods? Karen’s heart rate sped up. That’s
probably how they killed them, blunt force trauma.
“Ah well that’s what they get for coming to close,” Clyde
said looking straight at Karen. Her eyes went wide and her mouth made this
pitiful attempt at playing it cool but terrified won out.
“Yeah, look here boys,” Sam said with excitement and opened
the cooler—pulling a cooled bag of fresh fish fillets that they had purposely
not cleaned. Blood pooled in the corner
of the five pound bag and Perry pulled out another one and plopped it on the
counter.
Karen started with a low groan and then started screaming as
bags of bloodied human flesh was laid out on the counter. She let out a sharp
scream in Perry’s face before she high tailed it out of the general store and
out into the middle of the street—waving her arms and screaming murder like a
lunatic. Noah and Jamie were tangled in
each other’s arms on Henrie’s porch swing watching the entire event. Noah took a sip of lemonade while Jamie
laughed as one of the little old men on the corner snapped a picture of Mrs.
Hobbs tripping up Merna’s lawn.
~~~~~~~~~
The next day as Merna was hiding another package from the
mobile phone people she spotted a stack of Jamie’s papers in his room and
figured it was for the best to put them in the trash. She didn’t want Jerry all in the boy’s
business and Jamie had made it clear he had no intention of returning to his
job. So with a smile, Merna slipped the
files under her robe and quietly made her way into the kitchen. With a sly smile at Jerry and Karen, Merna
let the files slip to the bottom of the trash and silently let the lid close
behind her. Jerry narrowed his eyes but
went back to his paper.
~~~~~~~
Noah had his jeans around his ankles and Jamie’s palms were
planted on the work bench. The high noon
heat had both boys drenched with sweat but they didn’t mind. Loud rock music blared from the old radio in
the corner and Noah matched the beat with each thrust into Jamie. The blonde’s fist moved like a blur up and
down his own cock but his moans were no match for the wails coming from the
speakers next him. The metallic smell of
Noah’s welding, the feel of rough wood under his fingers, and Noah’s hands
gripping his sweaty hips sent Jamie over the edge and he arched—sending his
release all over the work table and the small window.
Planting a hand on the small of Jamie’s back, Noah pushed
Jamie’s face into the table and bucked inside of him. His chest met Jamie’s. Noah slid in deep and hard as they melted
together before he unraveled. His own
climax released deep inside of Jamie and he gave a dying moan while relaxing
his weight onto Jamie’s back.
“Fuck me,” Jamie
laughed and Noah lifted his head with a smile.
“You’ll have to give me a bit. I know I’m a stud but I’m no
machine,” Noah replied with a lick to Jamie’s bare shoulder.
“Oh whatever, Mr. Arrogant.
You give me a minute and I’ll
show you stud,” Jamie challenged.
“You are hornier than Perry after a six pack. Didn’t they show you the love up there baby?”
Noah smacked Jamie on the ass with a laugh.
“Not an image I particularly wanted but I guess if that
six-pack belonged to some rugged farm hand with a nice tan…” Jamie flipped over
and sat on the work bench then pulled his knees up—running his hands down his
bare chest and displaying his thoroughly worked goodies to Noah. “Then I guess
the image isn’t so bad.”
“I don’t work on no farm so you better tell me who the hell
you’re talking about. Because I’m just gonna have to go and whoop their ass.”
Noah grinned and pressed their bodies together again. Jamie pulled Noah in for a kiss and hooked
his legs around his boyfriend’s hips. “Like I said, you’re hornier than a cat
in heat. So needy…” Noah whispered over Jamie’s mouth.
The sound of a car screeching to a stop outside had Noah and
Jamie clamoring for their clothes. Pants
up, zippers secured, half righted shirts, and unlaced boots were all they had
time for. Mason pulled open the door and
came running inside. “Jamie, you’re step
freak is here with your mama. He demands
to see you and Noah you better get your ass out here too. That fat shit just called granny Ella Mae, a
blue haired, Helen Keller. You’re his boyfriend, so you get permission to hit
Hobbs. Family hits family first and all
that. But I swear to all that’s holy, if
ya’ll don’t balls up and hit him, I will!” Mason spit on the floor to seal his
pact with the almighty and narrowed his eyes before walking back outside.
“Family hits family first?” Jamie looked to Noah.
“Well you wouldn’t want no stranger sluggin Jerry would ya?
You have first rights and if you don’t, I do by association.” Noah smiled. “C’mon lets go deal with this before that guy
comes about the butterflies.”
Jamie felt much better about the whole Jerry situation. It had become a town sport to terrorize Jerry
and Karen. Buzz had let loose a
teaspoon’s worth of fire ants in Jerry’s coat while he was at the bar
yesterday. Jenna had crushed up two of
her daddy’s Viagra in his bear and the man had walked around all yesterday with
a boner like a flag pole and tiny white bite marks all over his body. Sam and Perry had called him Franken-dick all
damn day. It was pretty funny and that
image along drove Jamie on. Not only
that, but today was kind of big deal for Noah.
Jamie had been working all week on setting Noah’s work up online. His iron works were getting kind of out of
hand in the barn as he was cranking out about ten a week now. Plus he needed to buy supplies for cheaper,
so online it was.
Within the first few weeks of showing his stuff on Etsy, a
small web-page Jamie had set up for him, and a local dealer in Frankfort, Noah
had been getting calls from people all of the country. He didn’t know what to do about it, so a guy
from a glass blowing company in Louiseville was coming all the way over to
Shermin Heights to see about doing a show together here in town. Matt—the glass blower—had liked the sound of
a small town and thought Noah’s work was amazing. He said he’d love to keep everything
authentic about Shermin Heights and do it Noah’s way—draw in the true country
crowd and people that were there to appreciate the beauty of his work in its
element. Total artist type, Noah had laughed.
But Jamie could see how excited he was.
Walking out of the barn, hand in hand with Noah, Jamie
smiled darkly at Jerry who stormed over.
“I know what you’ve been up to James and your mother and I will not have
it anymore. This…” Jerry gestured to
their entwined fingers with rage. “Is not acceptable! He’s a fag and he’s draggin you down with
him. You are better than all this scum
hole of a town and this dirty hillbilly who is out to corrupt you. Now you’re
mother is upset and I think you’ve had your fill of this rebellious attitude.
So it’s time you got in the car and we we’re on our way. Your mother and I are
willing to forgive you. So come on
James, let’s go, enough of this.” Karen stood next to Henrie’s Bonneville and
slowly held up a hand to her son.
Noah’s hand was like a vice around Jamie’s, his jaw ticked
in anger but he stood perfectly still. That’s okay, Jamie thought. Because it was his punch to throw, Jamie
smiled. He turned to Noah and kissed him
on the lips much to Jerry’s disgust. Pulling
back, Jamie unwound his hand from Noah’s and took a step forward. “Yeah he’s a fag, but so am I. I’ve been into men since…well since before
you went and poached my mother. You see Jerry, I love Noah and there ain’t a
damn thing you can do about it. But I
will tell you one thing. If you ever
call my boyfriend a dirty hillbilly or his granny a blue haired Helen Keller
ever again, I’m going to whoop your ass.” Jamie narrowed his eyes. “Now I think
it’s time you got in the car with the woman who used to be my mother and went
on your way. Because I ain’t going
anywhere with you, I’m already home.”
Mason let out a whoop from the porch with a laugh and
flicked Jerry off in a true Mase fashion. Dee Pierson wiped her eyes and put
her arm around Ella Mae then shot a look to Henrie. He took off his hat and smiled at her
sweetly. She knew the next stop for the
Hobbs was a one way ticket to Frankfort on the Henrie express and she couldn’t
be more grateful to the Mayor. Henrie winked and put his hat back on.
“You will not disrespect me anymore son.” Jerry went to grab
Jamie but he ducked and brought his fist around into the side of Jerry’s face.
The fat suit howled and tried to grab for Jamie’s legs but got a kick to the
stomach instead. A resonating click
sounded from above him and Jerry groaned looking up.
“You get the hell off my property and don’t you ever come
back,” Noah growled, pointing his shot gun in Jerry’s face. “You ever lay a hand on Jamie again and you
can eat a few of these babies. You
understand you Hobbs?”
Calm as ever, Henrie walked to Jerry and helped him up. “Jerry and his beautiful wife were just about
to leave for Frankfort. So we’ll be on
our way. Ya’ll have yourselves a lovely afternoon and don’t forget about the
potluck at church on Sunday.” Henrie tipped his hat and guided a groaning Jerry
to the Bonneville. Karen didn’t even
look at Jerry as he was put in the car.
Instead she stared at her son from across the lawn and saw him for the
first time in a long time. Confused with
her sudden rise in maternal emotions, Karen gave Jamie one last look before she
got in the car and shut the door.
Jamie, Noah, and his family watched Henrie’s Bonneville
create clouds of dust down the long drive in their departure with relief. Jamie was shaking from head to toe and Noah
had to work to get the guy’s limbs to relax.
“I ain’t gonna ask if you’re okay, because I know you ain’t. But I need you to just take a few deep
breaths and shake your arms out. It’ll
help with all the macho juice you got flowin through ya right now.”
“Whoo Jamie! You got one hell of a right hook. Lord, I
cannot wait to tell Sam and Perry. They
gonna be so pissed they missed this.
Ha,” Mason called out and ran into the house to call the boys. Dee Pierson saw the way Jamie’s mother had
looked at him and her heart broke. That
woman loved her child but she was under the thumb of some man and what he said
was law. A woman like that had no spine
and deserved not an ounce of respect to her name. Poor baby, Dee took the
stairs down and crossed the lawn to Jamie.
She held out her arms and enclosed them around the boy—sending all the
love she had into him.
“I’m so sorry baby.” She kissed Jamie’s cheek and held his
face in her hands. “No mama should ever turn out her own baby but know that you
got enough mama to go around between me and Merna. You got us like you were our own and don’t
you ever forget that.”
Staring down at Noah’s mother, Jamie burst into tears and
finally let all the hurt out. Yeah he
hated Jerry but what he had secretly hoped for was one day his mother would
leave that son of a bitch. Maybe one day
she would come to her son and they could be a real family. It was stupid, Jamie knew that but knowing
for sure now that his mother didn’t want him was the final nail in his family’s
coffin. He had no past anymore, those
people were nothing to him now. His
dad’s memory was all he would keep with him as he looked at his new family with
a renewed heart. It would always be a
sore spot to Jamie but with the help of this town, he could mend all wounds.
“God, I’m sorry.” Jamie wiped his eyes and sniffled. “Look at me, the big baby.”
“You say sorry one more time and I’m going to make you watch
the Antique’s Road Show marathon with granny…without beer,” Noah promised and
Jamie cracked a smile.
“Don’t you threaten my boy,” Dee scoffed and looped her arm
through Jamie’s. “Just for that, he gets
two pieces of apple pie.”
“Oh hell no!” Noah protested and hurried to catch up to the
pair.
~~~~August~~~~~
People from all over Kentucky and some from farther out
wandered the streets of Shermin Heights.
Lunching at The Shermin Shack, checking out the goods at Buzz and Louisa’s
Antique Emporium, getting cold beers from Henrie’s Place, or even browsing the
local vendor booths set up around town.
And that was just the overflow.
Between Matt’s glass blowing and Noah’s iron sculptures, the Pierson
property was crawling with buyers, local news and papers, and people looking to
carry the guy’s work. Noah hadn’t
dropped his smile all day and always kept Jamie near.
Without Jamie none of this would have been possible and he
made sure to make that clear every chance he got. “Have I told you how much I love you today?”
Noah whispered to Jamie who blushed when a stray hand crept over his ass.
“About fifteen times,” Jamie replied quietly and handed out
Noah’s business card to an eager woman.
She clutched her prized garden stakes with tiny glass butterflies at the
top to her chest and wandered off. The
local ladies had catered the event and Jamie could see how much they loved to
serve others. Southern woman just had
that way about them. Not to say Jamie
thought that was their place, he just noticed that they put an extra oomph
behind anything they did because they loved the smiles they received in
return. It was a heart-warming process
to watch.
Dee hauled out another glass dispenser of sweet tea and
Mason followed with a multi-tiered display of mini lemon tarts. “You need some
help Dee?” Jamie grabbed the heavy dispenser and put it on the banquet
table.
“Thank you baby.” She patted Jamie on the back. Everything was going great and Matt could not
be more pleased with the turn out. That
is until a few minutes later, the crowds began to part for a convoy of white
vans escorted by two state cops and a blue Bonneville. “What in the hell?” Dee put her hands on her
hips and watched. Noah inhaled and let
it go, reaching for Jamie’s hand as Jerry and Karen Hobbs got out of the first
cruiser with two staties.
“Can I ask what all the trouble is officers?” Noah was loud
and clear. “This is my property.
“Kentucky State P.D.,
Noah Pierson, we have a warrant to search the premises for chemical
contamination and any bio-hazardous material that may have been leaked on the
property. We’re going to need you to
answer a few questions and have this property cleared immediately.”
“What! You can’t do that!” Jamie shouted and Noah held him
back. Jerry grinned as Jamie quieted.
“We have proof that a few acres on the estate wasn’t
properly secured after an oil testing last May.
Continuous exposure to the environment is dangerous, therefore the
warrant was issued sir. Now Mr. Pierson
if you’ll come with us.” The officer gestured over and Jamie shook from head to
toe.
Jerry chuckled. “Nice work son. I didn’t think you had it in
you but you really came through for us.” The fat ass waved a manila file at
Jamie with a wink. “You go on ahead and
we’ll catch up. Just need to close
things up on this end.”
Noah’s heart stopped in his chest and he looked at
Jerry. “What did you say?”
“You didn’t think he’d actually want a hillbilly for real
did you?” Jerry grinned and Karen slowly turned away to look at Jamie whose
horror showed on every inch of his body.
“He’s the one who did all the research for me. Hell, he isn’t even gay.” Jerry smiled and
Noah turned to Jamie.
Jamie couldn’t think past the anger boiling his blood. “I’ll kill you,” Jamie whispered.
“Jamie, you can drop the act now. We got what we needed.” Jerry moved out of
the way for a large crew of state officials with cases of equipment.
“How could you?” Noah felt his world dropping out from
underneath him. He’d seen that file in
Jamie’s room before they left. It even
had his name still scribbled on the front.
Jamie had grabbed all his papers when they ran away. He’d had to have given it Jerry personally.
“What! You believe him?” Jamie cried. “Are you serious Noah? He’s lying.”
“Noah Pierson,” Dee shouted but Noah stopped her with a
hand.
“Stay out of this mama.” Noah’s heart broke as he looked at
Jamie. “Get off my property. Now!”
“Noah…” Jamie pleaded and took a step forward. “I’m not lying.”
“But that’s your file isn’t it? Huh!”
“Yes but I…” Jamie cried.
“Then get the fuck off my lawn you damn Yankee.” Noah wanted
to collapse and scream until his lungs bled when Jamie’s face fell like death
and the blond wordlessly walked the path the crowd began to make for him. He didn’t look back as Jamie focused solely
on placing one foot in front of the other.
Noah would believe Jerry over him?
Then Noah couldn’t possibly love Jamie like he claimed. He was the liar, not Jamie. With a completely shattered heart, Jamie
walked off the property until he found the main dirt road and kept
walking. To where? He didn’t care
anymore.
Dee Pierson slapped her son so hard, her palm stung like the
bite of a thousand bees. “I raised you
better than that and you should be ashamed of yourself. You say you love that boy? You are a liar Noah Munroe Pierson. A liar and a fool! You’ll be lucky if he ever
forgives you.”
Noah looked at his mom and tears streamed down his cheeks.
“But it was all too perfect. Looking
back now, he was too perfect. He was
just getting information out of me. I mean he had stalked this place for weeks
mama. I saw him!” Noah rubbed his cheek and wiped back the tears.
“Shut your mouth!” Dee pointed a finger and then turned to
Karen Hobbs. “You! One day when you’re
rottin in hell for the sins you committed on that poor child, I want you to
remember this day as the day you officially sealed your fate within the
fires! You are a spoiled bitch who has
no heart and thinks about nothin more than money. You best get your ass away from me or I will
not be held responsible for what I do to you.”
Karen Hobbs spared a small look at her husband before she
took a deep breath and stepped in front of the crew about to infiltrate the
Pierson’s land. “Stop! Please, listen to
me.”
“What now you Yankee bitch?” Dee cried but Mason held her
back.
Karen looked over her shoulder at Dee. “You are absolutely right Mrs. Pierson. I am a horrible mother and it’s time I made
up for it.”
“Karen what are you doing?” Jerry hissed.
“The right thing,” she declared and straightened.
“Gentlemen, there is no evidence regarding the clean-up last
March. If you’ll allow me to have my
husband’s assistant fax you the correct work order, there were two inspections
on the property and both cleared. What
you hold in your hand is an error that my husband overlooked regarding another
property. When I looked into it last
month…”
“You what?” Jerry screamed.
“When I started investigating the matter myself because I
thought something sounded fishy, I came across it. The legal team was trying to fix the matter
as of two months ago but it never went into our database. My son initially thought he was onto
something and printed up that order because it was never fixed. When he gave up on the Pierson project and
tossed it in the trash, Jerry Hobbs stole the file with the idea that it would
be enough to get the Pierson land handed over and had the warrant conjured from
a judge friend of his in Frankfort. This
is all a lie and as the legal CEO of OilWorks, I would like to give my
apologies to you all and accept any consequences.”
“Karen!” Jerry roared and slammed a fist on the cruiser’s
hood.
“Ma’am, am I to understand that this warrant was issued by a
judge who was paid under the table over a fake work order that was dug out of
the trash?” The cop pulled off his sunglasses and put them in his shirt pocket.
“Yes, sir.” Karen nodded.
“Well I’ll be damned. That’s got to be the craziest shit I
ever heard. How bout you Dave?”
“Pretty damn crazy.” The cop’s partner agreed.
“Pack it up boys! We’ve been duped,” the leading officer
called. “Mr. and Mrs Hobbs, ya’ll are
gonna have to come back with us. I’m not
even sure what to charge you with but at the very least, we’ve got some
questions.”
“Just a minute. Please?” Karen asked the officer who nodded
like it was the most normal part of his day.
Karen turned to Noah who was numb from the inside out. “He
never lied to you. Thank you for loving
him when I didn’t remember how. I’m so sorry.” She covered her mouth to keep
from crying as she got into the back of the cruiser.
“Noah?” Dee put a hand on her shaking son. Thunder rumbled over head like the inner
workings of Noah’s heart and a mid-afternoon summer rain poured from the
sky. People shrieked and laughed—running
under the vendor tents of the porch of the house. Some even sought shelter in the comfort of
their cars but there was no comfort for Noah.
Jamie was out there all alone after Noah had betrayed him in the most
horrible way possible.
“I gotta go mama.” Noah shrugged her off and started
running. Mason rolled his eyes at his brother
and pulled the keys to the truck out of his back pocket.
“Yo, Forest Gump! Get your ass over here. I’m drivin! Keep
things rollin Matt! Storm will clear in a bit.” Mason whooped and banged his
palm on the truck in excitement. This
was like that epic moment you waited for all your life and even if it wasn’t
his, it was joyful all the same. He
loved his big brother and even though Noah was the world’s biggest dumb ass at
the moment, Mason would walk through fire to help him out.
Noah wrenched open the passenger door and had barely closed
it when Mason reversed like a mad man and took off down the drive. People ducked out of their way and Mason
gunned it down the long dirt road. “You
see which way he headed?” Mason called over the rumble of the truck.
“I was a little busy to notice Mase.” Noah gripped the dash
and kept his eyes peeled. The wipers
were going top speed keeping back the rain that wouldn’t quit. “Shit Mase.
What the hell have I done! Why
would I believe that fat bastard? Oh my
God.”
“You said he was too perfect. You only think that because everything else
is hard. We lost daddy, you sacrificed
that house and the shop to take care of mama and granny. Whether you admit it or not, you take care of
me but you never take care of yourself.
Jamie brought that other side out of you—relaxed you so much that when the
tough stuff reared it’s ugly head, cynic Noah stepped right back in. You stopped thinkin with your heart when
daddy died and you’re having to learn to love all over again. More than the rest of us I guess.”
Noah stared at his younger brother as every word the boy
said was true. “When the hell did you
get so wise?”
“When you weren’t lookin.” Mason grinned and spotted a red
shirt in the distance. “Noah! It’s him.”
“Stop right here!” Noah all but screamed and was out of the
vehicle and running top speed before Mason put it in park. “Jamie!”
Jamie let the rain wash over him like liquid humiliation and
wondered if there was anything worse than this feeling that he couldn’t
describe. His wet jeans were starting to
rub him the wrong way and his t-shirt was becoming cold against his skin. Done past miserable, Jamie kept walking. He knew he’d passed the sign for downtown a
few streets ago, so he had oh about ten miles until he’d get to the
highway. Where he would what? Jamie cried
even though no one would be able to tell with the rain. So when he heard his name being called, he
didn’t believe it at first. After the
third time though, he stopped and turned around. Noah came at him like a bullet from a gun—his
face a mess of pain.
“Noah?” Jamie stepped back but was captured within Noah’s
arms. With nowhere else to go, Jamie
clung to Noah for balance.
“Oh God,” Noah cried and brought the both of them to their
knees. “Jamie I am so sorry. I’m the world’s biggest asshole and I don’t
deserve you. But I love you and I can’t
let you go. I’m sorry that I thought for
one second you would do that to me. I
should’ve known baby. I’m so sorry.”
“What changed your mind then?” Jamie hid his face. He couldn’t really blame Noah for the
fleeting thought that he had something to do with it initially. It had been his job. But denying him like that was what had broken
Jamie.
“Your mom confessed everything to the cops. She ratted out
Jerry and thanked me for loving you.”
“She what?” Jamie looked up into Noah’s eyes.
“She loves you Jamie.
But not as much as I do.”
“If you tell me that Noah Pierson,” Jamie cried. “This time
you better fucking mean it.”
“I always meant it Jamie.
This time, I just know why.” Noah kissed his boy and pulled Jamie into
his lap. “I love you because without
you, I’m nothing. And I don’t ever wanna feel that again.”
Jamie took a deep breath and knew the choice was his. He could leave Noah here to feel what he’d
felt momentarily or he could be above that and forgive the asshole. Jamie didn’t
have to think long about it because leaving Noah by choice was like ripping a
limb from his body. Not being very smart
in matters of love, Jamie was pretty confident that the dread at the thought of
leaving Noah Pierson behind meant he loved him.
He went with that.
“Me neither. Don’t
you ever do that again.” Jamie pouted and searched Noah’s eyes.
“Never. Love me?” Noah pressed his forehead to Jamie’s.
“Yes.” Jamie grinned and inched his lips closer to Noah’s.
“Thank God.” Noah kissed Jamie and forgot about the
rain. A strange tinkling noise made both
boys look up with confused expressions.
A small wind chime made of forks swirled about high in the tree above. “How the…”
Jamie broke into a smile and grabbed Noah behind the
neck. “Good lookin out pop,” Jamie said
to the heavens above before he kissed Noah back. Because no matter how hard he could even
think to try, Noah Pierson would always be on his mind.
THE END
So totally awesome!
ReplyDeleteThis chapter had everything. Rollercoaster of emotions with a great ending!!!
Thanks Pat, glad you enjoyed the ride. :D xoxo -Night
DeleteDjxkncjdnxnakanx. Absolutely loved this. Me and my country boy fetish. Drama, hot sex and southern charm - Perfection. Another flawless story from Miss Night. (:
ReplyDelete~ Seahaven
Ooo country boy fetish? Me too! Thanks seahaven. Muah. -Night
DeleteI wanted to smack Noah when he believed Jerry....but the rain scene totally made up for it....truly beautiful story! Keep up the GREAT writing :D
ReplyDeleteOh my goodness that was a hard scene to write and I wanted to beat him too but I'm glad I could make it up to you. Thanks Mia. <3 -Night
DeleteI absolutely adores this quickie!!! Favorite one by far!! Had my blubbering like a giant baby XD, cant wait for your next anything! You are truly amazing!
ReplyDeleteMuch love,
-Kevin
Awww thanks Kevin! You're a sweetheart. <3 -Night
DeleteThat was just perfect, and the photos above were just what I'd pictured. You obviously did a wonderful job at describing them.
ReplyDeleteWow thanks vamp. I tried the whole 'let the reader imagine what they look like' technique even though I had the pics. Awesome. :) -Night
DeleteI absolutely loved it! It was so beautiful and sweet and hot and everything!
ReplyDeleteNever stop writing, please? I'll keep reading whatever you write, even when I'm 90 and have to make my grandchildren read for me
Haha I just got this image of your grandkids reading sex scenes to you. Rofl. Now there's a story! Lololol. Thanks so much Sam! Xoxo -Night
DeleteNight, just when I think you can't write an even better story, you go and surprise me. This story was sooo amazing. I loved it! The pics at the top are hott! I was just about to go to bed and sleep when I saw it was posted,made my night, thanks !! :)
ReplyDeleteI hope I didn't take away from your beauty sleep. :) Well I always love to surprise you guys. So thanks for reading and drooling over the pics. *yummy* xoxo -Night
DeleteThis story is my all time favorite now Night. U made me laugh and cry and mad when I thought Noah believed Jerry over Jamie. Loved this quickie. The jokes that the town played had me laughing so hard my daughter asked me if I was ok. U truly are a great writer. Keep the stories coming. The pictures are fantastic just how I pictured Jamie and Noah.
ReplyDeleteHeeeeeey Shantelly! Rofl, I giggled writing all the prank scenes because I totally saw it happening in my head. Thank you for favoring this story because it's up there on my list too. Have a good week. Xoxo -Night
Delete**throws glitter over Night**
ReplyDeletewhat an awesome end to a beautifully told story! (and those pics - gosh, fans self!)
Lol I'm glad Jerry got what was coming to him and Jamie's mom learned the error of her ways. And yay for the heartfelt HEA!
Also love the use of 'human koala' ;)
Yes this one definitely gets added to the favourites list :)
Big hugs
~ Thing2 ;) xx
Hahahaha. I'm glad you liked this one, it's for sure one of my faves now. Hugs back. <3 -t1 aka the human koala
DeleteOver-the-top hilarious, sexy-sweet and sad, your story had everything. Glad Jamie's mom finally realized where her heart should be and Noah grew a brain. Excellent.
ReplyDelete:-) what can I say? I like variety within a story. Lol. Thanks Clifford. Xoxo -Night
DeleteRofl. Omg I so wrote cliff and it was autocorrected. In no way was I implying you are a big red dog. :-D
DeleteOmg, Jamie forgive too easily . He should kick one or two round of that ass XOXO
ReplyDeleteThis story is just so cute and heart warming .
Thanks for the good read.
I'm sure if there was another chapter, Jamie would give that ass some much deserved punishment but ill leave that up to your imagination. You are very welcome and thank you for the comment xiu xiu. Muah. -Night
DeleteThank you so much for this story, Night. I loved evey single word. Noah and Jamie were such a cute couple. I nearly cried when Noah didn't believe him, but that last scene totally made up for it. Keep up the good work.
ReplyDeleteLauren <3
Hello Ms. Lauren! Thanks for the comment and my goodness, everyone is loving this rain scene. Lol. Then again, I loved it too. Thanks so much... again. <3 -Night
DeleteH.E.A. !!!!!
ReplyDeleteLoved it from start to finish. Of all your quickies I love this one best. You've somehow managed to include everything a great romance needs into 3 fabulous parts. Amazing !!
Yay! I'm glad to give you the warm and fuzzies. Thanks Jade. You rock. Xoxo -Night
DeleteThat was nicely done Night! It sure took care of my fix of romance... Maybe even be more patient in waiting for the next follow up on any of your stories... Maybe. In the mean while it gives me another reason to not like students right now ( I'm from Quebec.) Damn proms... Ha! Ha!
ReplyDeleteKym
Thanks Kym! And oh I know all about the hell that is prom. Rofl. Stay strong girl! <3 -Night
DeleteAwesome story, loved the pranks the town were helping the boys play and the happy ending. I thought I was going to cry when Noah sent Jamie away!If I were Jamie I would have kicked Noah's ass a bit more though for being so quick to believe Jerry's lies!
ReplyDeleteHaha ill let you imagine the punishment after the ending. ;) Thanks! <3 -Night
DeleteI loved it. I was sad to see it end but I'm glad they got their HEA. :) I can't wait for more from you.
ReplyDeleteHey coffee! I didn't want it to end either. :( But all good things must come to an end. Thanks for reading! Xoxo -Night
DeleteLoved it. The end was dynamite; it had a little bit of everything in it. I liked how Jaime grew and evolved and loved when he punched Jerry. I hate to see it end. Thank you.
ReplyDeleteThanks Avid and you're welcome. I'm sad to let these boys go but I feel they'll come back once or twice. ;) <3 -Night
DeleteI got to this one a bit late but- I love it! The human koala line was adorable!
ReplyDeleteI am the human Koala. *fist pump* rofl Thanks Lilly. :D -Night
DeletePerfect. I'd give you a hug, but I'd get Reagan's glitter all over me...oh, what the hell! *HUG*!
ReplyDeleteNoah and Jamie- Don't we all wish for some of that love in reality! Ya know, I have a love/hate relationship with near-tears while reading. The words get all blurry!
*woohoo! glitter for everyone!* hee hee :D
DeleteReagan glitters everywhere, don't sweat it. *Hugs back* I seriously believe that there is someone out there for everyone. You just have to drop the blinders and ridiculous standards that society has given us and look with your heart. Your other half may not be what you expected or dreamed of in your fantasies but when you click, you click.
DeleteI wish more people would just look around them a little closer and see who is watching back because nine out of ten times, we overlook that other person. I write sappy love stories because even though I throw a lot of fictional dramatics at you, that kind of love can be real. I hope everyone can experience it at least once in their lives.
Oh and P.S. Guilty secret #267 At least once when writing every one of my stories...I cry while typing. You aren't alone.
Thanks Scot :) xoxo ~Night
*Reagan* No more glitter! Rofl. <3
Thank you Night, I think I needed that :)
DeletePerfect. I'd give you a hug, but I'd get Reagan's glitter all over me...oh, what the hell! *HUG*!
ReplyDeleteNoah and Jamie- Don't we all wish for some of that love in reality! Ya know, I have a love/hate relationship with near-tears while reading. The words get all blurry!
Great story loved it. Really liked the photos in the posts as well, Damn Noah has some hot ass feet.
ReplyDeleteHaha, I said the same thing about his feet but then again I do nails so I notice that kind of stuff. You into feet? *meow* :D
DeleteThanks so much for your comment! <3 ~Night
Yep love the feet. You are amazing love to read your work, can't wait to see the next chapter of Dan and Rowe. Thank you for sharing your talent with us mortals
DeleteRon
Loved th story! And of course being a southern gal myself I enjoyed it even more!
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*Southern girl high-five* This story made me miss my family soooo much but that's the joy of writing--to share your heart with others. Thanks M! <3 ~Night
DeleteAnother awesome story from you! Was on a emotional rollercoaster - crying, laughing, than ready to kill Jerry! Last part just made me speechless, was breathtaking! Please keep writing!!!!!
ReplyDeleteEvery time I read one of your stories, I think to myself that it's wonderful to see the love between the two characters you write about. Even with all the bad stuff they go through, the fact that at the end of the day two people share love like that makes me hopeful, even though I'm female and straight. I just love seeing/reading about happy/successful couples. Thankyou for being such a brilliant author.
ReplyDeleteI have read all your stories and though I never comment I felt I would be foolish of me not to tell you how awesome a writer you are!!!! I followed you from Lit but just noticed these quickies and boy did you have my emotions all over the place.(lol).. Reading this story I laughed till I cried.. I feel for one to be a great writer it takes passion, a understanding and respect for people and things even when their views are not your own, and to be able to imagine and dream big.. Your great��
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ReplyDeleteI really enjoyed reading your work amd I am a fan.
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