Hello there!
I hope you’re all happy the weekend is here. And for those of you like myself where a
weekend means more work, then I hope this little piece of FFF gets you by. :)
This week’s prompt was:
1. Ancient
Ruins – Use a set of ruins (fictional or a real location)
as a key location in your chapter/story.
I twisted this up a bit for the sake of the storyline
and used the Keep as my ruins. I hope you enjoy this week’s The Great
Mage. Be sure to visit our other
wonderful bloggers to see what they’ve cooked up this week. Stay warm. Keep safe.
Love you all.
~Night
Flash
Fiction Friday Bloggers:
The
Great Mage: Week 16
The White Mage, formerly trapped in the body of a
dove, was now a force to be reckoned with.
With his palms raised toward the outpour of Ghouls rushing from the
trees, white light surged from his hands like fire. Inside the swirling flames were dancing black
ruins, dark magic protected by Aneris’s gift of white blaze. And because the man hadn’t used his gifts in
so long they rushed out of his body with such speed and anger that the Ghouls
didn’t stand a chance. The trees were
engulfed in white. Screams lit up the
night. But above all other voices,
Aneris heard the White Mage’s bellow of fury, heard his pain and suffering and
need to rise above it.
Aneris growled, understanding that kind of ire,
capable of it himself. He forced himself
to turn away from the battle that had begun and held onto Seth tightly as they
rode towards the wall. Flames sizzled in
long streaks against the night, aimed down into the muddy mote bordering the
castle. Unease tickled Aneris’s memory,
tugging forth something he remembered said not too long ago. Swamp maids lived in mud. Their song beckoned forth the strongest
soldiers to lure them to their death.
He knew for a fact this mote hadn’t been filled with
mud before this night. Mud was dark and
dirty, nothing representative of white magic or a white kingdom. The once sparkling waters were black and
bubbling, smoking with a stench Aneris wriggled his nose at. He had no way to warn the others of this
recent development. At least that was
what he thought until he spied the blue orbs shooting past him.
“Fae! Seth, stop!”
Aneris slapped Seth’s chest. “It’s
a trap. We have to warn them.”
“What are you talking about?” Seth glanced over his shoulder, but rode up
the hill, commanding Fia faster.
“Fae, stop and listen to me!” Aneris lifted his hand and a Fae lantern
grazed across his fingers. It swirled in
his palm, the essence of a warrior ready for battle. Once he was sure he had its attention, he
brought his hand close to his eyes. “The
moat is filled with mud. It’s a trap for
us all. Swamp—“
All at once an ethereal chant pierced the air. A haunting melody that made Aneris’s heart constrict
in his chest. He tried to cover his ears
but his hands were too heavy and his brain seemed slow. The Fae lantern in his hand bobbed urgently
in an attempt to regain his attention.
Nevertheless Aneris was enchanted with the song that filled his ears, as
was Seth who tried to dismount Fia’s back.
The horse wasn’t having any of it.
She wasn’t a male warrior. She
could hear the song for what it really was.
She swerved to the left, keeping her masters aboard her back for as long
as she could against the Swamp Maids’ spell.
The Fae lantern sliced through the air, coming at
them full speed until it smacked into Aneris’s face, covering he and Seth in
brilliant blue light. Aneris gasped, his
chest filling with air as if lungs had been prisoner to something he couldn’t
overcome. He patted the wall of blue
light that caged them on Fia’s back. And
it dawned on him then what they had to do.
The Fae were warriors, yes, but they were creatures
made of magic, not just men who could be easily enticed. They were immune to the Swamp Maid’s
song. And it was apparent that Sylvius
had not intended Aneris to gain their help in this battle. Or the Trolls, who also were immune to such
enchantments—seeing as how the ground vibrated with their feet, and their
movements were still their own, and the Ghouls still screamed for mercy. Trolls and Fae were the eldest of the
creatures in Aneris’s army. They were
created by nature, made to withstand the test of time, and the Guardians of
these lands. Sylvius had judged them
wrongly. Aneris had never looked at them
any different for what they were. He’d
eyed them with respect, thankful for their help and acknowledged them with
murmured praises. He’d given both races
a chance to be a part of something big, to unite instead of break down what
these lands were made of. He’d made the
right choice once again and his reward was protection within the arms of these
two powerful races.
And so it was with great pleasure that Aneris
watched the two races converge with a plan.
The Fae lanterns, untouchable male warriors who lit the way with the
core of their souls, blanketed the moat and spread their light until the muddy
waters were sealed. And the sickly green
faces of the Swamp Maids melted into the earth under the pressure of such old
magic. The Trolls did their part, asking
the trees and the earth for help. Roots separated
from their richly soiled homes and crawled like tendrils across the grassy
slope, dragging their heavy trunked and branched counterparts with them.
It took some time for the trees to bend and twist to
their destination. The wooded shelter
for Sylvius’s minions’ attack relocating until one giant spider web of bark and
foliage tangled against the walls of the castle on all sides. Imprisoned beneath the moat, held captive in
ancient roots that dove back beneath the soil were the Swamp Maids Sylvius had
brought to this war.
The Fae lanterns flitted out from between the dark
crevices of the newly made walls, bursting into the night like lightning bugs
but much brighter. Now the Archers atop
the galleys could focus their efforts on the Black King’s knights who had been
exposed without a shelter to hide them.
Their fire tipped arrows pierced jet black armor, scoring points with
each shriek from their enemy’s lips; bodies doubly scorched when the White Mage
blasted them for good measure.
And Aneris was sure this was meant to be. Everyone had a part to play. The Trolls had guarded their lands by relying
on their Mother. The Fae had taken out
an unnatural race of swamp dwelling demons who had desecrated their lands for
centuries. The White Mage earned Aneris’s
respect by never turning away from the fire, keeping his magic burning bright
hit after hit as if to take years of abuse out on the King who had never
appreciated him.
The White King’s knights flooded the grassy hill to
take up arms in their king’s name.
Swords clinked. Men cried out for
mercy. Fires blazed. Blood was shed. And Aneris refused to sit their protected
when he and Seth had the hardest job to do of all. He stared up at the steep lattice like wall
of trees so old he couldn’t fathom how long they’d been there. And he knew where he was needed.
“They guard the Keep strongly. If it takes one more blow it will fall and
our king will be no more.” Seth stared
over his shoulder. “It is the oldest
structure in our world, ruins to most, and once a temple for all four
elementals until they parted ways.”
“I thought you said it was strong!” Aneris climbed off of Fia, noticing how the
Trolls surrounded them at once, backs facing he and Seth to shelter them for
the next leg of their journey.
“It is…for now.
The magic there hasn’t been used in centuries. It is precious because of how little remains
of the four elementals’ combined force.
It is what is holding up what’s left of the walls, only activated when
the king is in dire need. They sought to
give him protection in the Great War and he and his family were sheltered there
for so long it is rumored that if another war were to start, they would not
survive. I have no idea how long it will
hold this time, Aneris.” Seth’s concern
was clear by the hitch in his voice. His
eyes lit up gold behind his helmet. And suddenly
his feet were planted on the ground, his hands clutching Fia’s reins as if it
were his lifeline.
“We have to save them, Seth. If Sylvius is trying to keep us out and it’s
rumored the walls of the Keep won’t hold for long…” Aneris choked on his words and his gaze shot
up to the top of the wall.
“Sylvius is going in there,” Seth supplied in horror. He turned to his horse, his beloved friend until
the end. Fia couldn’t go with them for
this part of the battle. And neither of
them knew when they’d see each other again.
Seth ran his hand over her fiery mane with a loving caress. “It has been good, old friend. Shall I not see you again…know I hold your
spirit in my heart.” He nuzzled his
helmet along her muzzle, and hugged her neck with a warm embrace. The fire along her tail and mane
brightened. She was sad and angry. Aneris felt it in the depths of his soul as
Seth took a step back.
Aneris walked up to Fia. He put his bare hand between her ears,
tickled by the fire that would never burn him.
He kissed her muzzle, his hand lingering along her fire as he closed his
eyes. “Thank you, Fia. Thank you for keeping him safe for me all
these years. I promise I’ll bring him
back to you. I promise you that,” Aneris
murmured. Before he cried his anguish at
his mate’s loss, at his, Aneris turned away from Fia. His cape billowed around him in the
wind. The bands along his arms and chest
glowed strong with his magic, as did his eyes and the light in his palms.
He turned to his mate, taking a deep breath. “We go
where he goes. This ends tonight.” Aneris put a foot into the gnarled loop of
tree near the base of the wall and lifted himself up.
Seth shuddered with one last look at his loyal
friend, his treasured Fia, before he swatted her side. “Go!”
Fia burst into flames, her entire body covered in
angry fire she chose to share with the world.
She raced through the wall of Trolls and into the thick of battle where
her flames could be seen from afar. Fia
would be just fine. She would keep distracted by the rage and violence she’d
inflict while her masters were away. But
Seth wondered as he joined his mate at the wall to hoist himself up, whether he
and Aneris would be.
A roar ripped through the sky. A leathery mass of black swooped over the
castle, wings flapping with a deafening clap.
Fire shot from Killian’s nostrils as he swirled overhead, granting them
safe passage for the time being. Seth
narrowed his eyes at his mate and sheathed his sword at his back. “Let’s do this.”
Aneris smiled, nodded, and began the long climb to
the top of the wall.
To be continued…
Ahhhhh.... so good and not enough all at the same time! Its going to be very difficult to wait until next Friday. I really love this story :)
ReplyDeleteGreat Chapter :-)
ReplyDeleteThis would make a great movie it has a Lord of The Rings feel to it or maybe Eragon lol
massive time loop flash forward 1 week its Friday again. oh man guess my time machine didn't work f guess I gotta wait till next week. (sniffles and give puppy dog eyes)
ReplyDeleteBrilliant stuff! Very vivid, gonna be hard to wait till next week!
ReplyDelete- Faolin