Hey everyone! First, let me say thank you to
all the words of support last week. My dad had a heart attack the
Sunday before last and it was pretty terrifying. But he's recovering
now, and he's getting the help he needs. Still, we're all on edge because
my dad is the kind of guy who's going to do what he wants whether the doctor
tells him to chill out or not. So, basically, we (us kids) are all
taking shifts babysitting with my mom. LOL. At least the Tiger/Sox
games are keeping him busy, because the man refuses to miss his baseball.
*shaking my head* So, again, thank you so much for the kinds words.
I appreciated them all.
And... On with the flash fiction! We're
back this week with a new prompt, courtesy of the fabulous Elaina M.
Roberts. Just a head's up before we begin: Winter will be posting her
installment on Sunday. Check back with her blog then. Okay, the new
prompt, as I was saying, deals with the great Edgar Allen Poe and his piece The
Raven.
Edgar Allen Poe –
Read the poem The Raven. Use at least one line from the poem in
your chapter/story. Dialogue is okay, but narrative is even better. You can
read the poem online here -http://www.poemhunter.com/poem/the-raven-14/
<<< For those of you who have never read it, go ahead and take a peek.
I chose to spin the lines:
"And his eyes have all the seeming of a
demon's that is dreaming,
And the lamplight o'er him streaming throws his shadow on the
floor..."
And the lamplight o'er him streaming throws his shadow on the
floor..."
The usual rules apply: stick within a 2K word count
every week, use the prompt given and bend it into submission. I hope you all like this week’s installment
of The Great Mage. Visit the other
bloggers and see what they’re up to this week.
Love you guys so much and GO TIGERS!!!
LOL I had to sneak that in there somewhere. *Hugs*
~Night
The
Great Mage: Week 13
Upon further inspection of the small dove, Aneris’s
initial impression of its innocence melted away. There was something frightening about the way
the creature cocked its head, gazing up at him as if trying to see inside his
mind. And his eyes had all the seeming
of a demon's that was dreaming. And the
lamplight streaming over him threw his shadow on the floor. It was wrong, the way his shadow wasn’t crisp
against the straw covered floor, instead cloudy around the edges, dancing with
tendrils of magic like his form could barely be contained. His beady black eyes never left Aneris’s as
he said, “Ah, I see you understand now.”
“Not really.”
Aneris shifted towards Seth. They
watched the dove settle on a mound of straw and shift his gaze to Fia. The horse plastered itself into the stable
wall, untrusting of the pintsized fowl. “What
the hell are you?”
“He’s one of the Gamemaster’s villainous prisoners.” Seth bopped the bird on the head with a
finger. He smiled. “He’s forced to live out his days in two
forms. One shall be something of significance
to a person he or she wronged, and the other shall represent white magic to
mock him for eternity. Clever on the
Gamemaster’s part, although, he is a rather clever man.”
Aneris sneered.
“And what the hell is he doing here?”
“I’m paying my penance so that I may shift back into
my natural form once I’ve done what I’ve been called to do.” The dove’s wings ruffled. He dipped his head with a small huff.
“Let me get this straight, you’re a bad guy who is
imprisoned inside of a bird—”
“I’m a dove, thank you very much, and sometimes… a
handkerchief. Damn nobles and their love
of fabric.” The dove turned around,
giving the men his tail. He plopped back
into the straw as if done with the conversation.
“Who cares what you are now. Why are you here at all? There’s a war going on and the last thing we
need is to deal with another one of the Gamemaster’s mindfucks.” Aneris put his stew on an overturned bucket
and leaned against Seth, hoping he would wake up from this ridiculous dream.
“Don’t act as though I want to be here, child.” The dove waddled around his makeshift nest
until he faced the men. “You are my key
to freedom, what little I shall have in my human body. And I have been promised just that. In return
for my knowledge that will help you on your journey into the Black
Kingdom. What better tracker than a
bird?” Cocking its head once more, the dove waited for an answer, frozen in a
mocking pose.
“You’re the tracker the men are waiting on? Have you news of the enemy?” Seth straightened, pushing up to his knees.
“Aye. Unfortunately,
I am but a wee little bird. Of no use to
you,” he spat in a tiny voice at Aneris.
“What could I tell you that you would hear?”
“Because you want your freedom and if I’m correct
with the stories I’ve been told, you’re forbidden to tell anyone but your
master and who he deems necessary of your identity. And if you betray your master in any way your
life is null and void. Am I correct?” Seth grinned at the bird. He chanced a look at his mate. “Heard about a black magic cook once. Stories say she was turned into the cup she
used to poison her ladyship and her other form was a cricket. She tried again to defy the Gamemaster by
hitching a ride to the Black King to tell him of her woes. The next day she was
trampled to death by a horse. Sad really—she
could have done great things for our side.”
“A cricket?”
Aneris hid his smile. “Things
could have been worse for you, I suppose,” he taunted the bird. Puffing out his chest, the dove snapped his
beak in warning. “Fine, all right, what
news do you have of the enemy?”
“The Shifter Tribe has left for the White King’s
castle, should arrive before morning.
But I have seen with my own eyes Sylvius means to storm the castle
before they come to protect their king. Sylvius’s
men are in place in the bordering woods, and his magic grows with every hour he
meditates. Come morning, he will have
the White King’s head if his Mage is not there to save him. Without the White King’s life breathing into
his kingdom these lands will die and all of his people will be subjects of the
Black King. Move now and I will guide
you there. You have my freedom in your
hands. Therefore I will not betray you.”
Aneris squinted at the bird, his mind running a mile
a minute. Everything up until this point
had been a test. Trusting Seth gave him
the gift of love. Seth’s courage against
his uncle had gained him faith in the unknown and confidence. Aneris’s sacrifice in the valley earned him a
fresh start, another chance at life with a better understanding of what he
wanted, and an innocent life had been saved from the fire. Every time he began to doubt their direction
on this journey, he was tested.
This time it was backwards; they had been given a
gift first and now the test was how to use it.
Turn down the bird because of his past, whoever he had wronged, and they
would have to lead on their own, running blind into a war. But, if they trusted the bird and what he
said was true, he would lead them right to Sylvius and give them a chance to
stop the White King’s death. Either way,
Aneris still had a long journey ahead of him.
The war, his life at stake with the White Lady, getting her love home to
her, Seth and what happened after the quests ended, and what to do with these
powers if he ever returned home.
There was no harm in taking help for a leg of the
journey. If the mysterious Gamemaster
entrusted such valuable information with this tiny creature then Aneris would
have to trust him too. So far the
Gamemaster had never steered him wrong.
Following his instincts was the name of the game. And if he did, another life could be saved—many
lives could be saved. Who was he to be selfish
and say no?
“Seth, tell the Cerebus to make sure the men have
everything they need. We leave within
the hour and will travel hidden by the night.
The bird will guide us where we need to be. Cross me, dove, and I’ll make a cricket look
like heaven compared to what I’ll do to you.”
The dove bowed his head. “Spoken like a true Mage.”
***
All of the knights’ torches had been snuffed out in
favor of Fae lanterns that burned softer against the pitch of night. It had been a struggle to get the drunken
Sidhe to get off their asses long enough to procure the glowing blue lights,
but whatever they’d said to the woods, even drunk as they were, worked like a
charm. The blue orbs descended from the
trees one by one until hundreds of them bobbed above the army of royal warriors
and misfits who had joined the fight.
The untraveled path the dove led them along was
tangled with branches and thrown into shadows that were only visible by razor
sharp shards of moonlight cast from the treetops. Aneris was thankful whenever a Fae lantern
whisked in front of him to show him the way.
Otherwise he would have had to use his precious magic and deplete his
energy before the fight began. And he
would alert the army that waited miles away.
He felt the thrum of Sylviu’s magic now.
It tingled along his skin, powerful and dark, and Aneris worried his own
skills wouldn’t be enough to save them.
He worried for Seth who rode Fia at his side, the
Red Knight who had only just begun to believe in himself. He worried for the knights who had come to
fetch their new leader, Aneris, and whether they trusted him to make commands
or not. He worried for the silent
shifter on his right, the black dragon who had a grudge against Sylvius
befitting of a demon. The new shifter
was a wild card. He didn’t speak
much. He didn’t ask questions. But every once in a while he would sniff the
air, sensing the dark magic on the horizon, and his eyes would flash red.
Aneris was tired, physically and emotionally
so. Only days ago he’d fallen into this
mess and learned so much about his self in that short time. But was it really enough to fight
Sylvius? Maybe, or maybe he would fail
and the magic inside of him, the power that was supposedly as great as the
Gamemaster’s, would go to waste before he ever had a chance to know it
intimately.
The runes that made up his magic danced inside of
him, eager to escape and show the world what he was made of. The rings at his back were warm, like the
palms of his hands—the two craved to be reunited for a battle of epic proportions. The only problem remaining was how to make
his head and his heart catch up with the infinite magic inside of him he knew
to exist.
“You should rest,” the Shifter spoke. His words so faint Aneris thought he’d
imagined them until he peered up at the hulking male.
“No rest for the wicked.” Aneris shuffled along, certain he did need to
sleep, even after his dead man’s nap.
Rest meant recharging his magic and his body. Unfortunately there was nowhere to do so, and
he didn’t want to worry Seth by closing his eyes at such a time. Seth would
only want to break and care for his mate, as was programmed into his shifter
blood.
“One must only ask for help and help they shall
receive. You are not alone in this,
Great One.” Aneris thought he saw a
smile touch the dragon’s lips before the shifter reached out to caress a Fae
lantern. The blue orb slid down his
fingers, danced around his muscled arm, and then sat on his shoulder, close to his
ear. A whispery exchange was made and
the orb shot off into the dark.
“What did you just do?” Aneris stopped, halting their traveling
party.
Seth brought Fia to a stop and was ready to dismount
when the dragon of old raised his palm. “Do you have any water, Red Knight?” Seth nodded.
His contemplation moved between Aneris and the mysterious shifter until
he felt confident enough to hand the shifter a leather-wrapped pouch from
around his neck. “Thank you.”
Aneris sighed. “Seriously, what are you doing?”
“Our journey remains, Dark One,” the dove provided
with a hint of shared irritation. He
peeked out from between Fia’s perked ears.
“One man’s sacrifice is nature’s treasure. Water is life to all things. A gift.”
The dark shifter poured the water from the pouch, dumping it onto the ground
to be sucked up by the earth. He held
the empty pouch in hand, waiting and watching the woods.
The army shied away from the direction the shifter
looked when the first thuds vibrated the forest floor. And when more movement rocked the earth from
the other direction, they began to draw their weapons. “No!”
The dragon commanded. “Do not
attack.”
Seth yanked on Aneris’s arm, forcing him to board
Fia in case they needed to run. But the
bodies tall as trees that emerged from the forest surrounded them. Skin made of leaves and vines curling about
their limbs, the trolls peered down at them all with clear blue eyes.
The dragon bowed, this time he was smiling. “We ask for your help.”
To be continued…
Thank you for writing this, despite what you're going through at the moment... Lots of good vibes coming your way to help you through! :-)
ReplyDeleteWonderful read again, as usual!
- Faolin
Sending good mojo to you and yours in hopes this will pas soon and he'll heal (and behave himself). Great job this week. I do love this story. *hugs*
ReplyDeleteSending good thoughts and lots of love. Great chapter
ReplyDeleteI'm so sorry to hear about your Father. I wish him all the best in his recovery :-) and wish you and the fam all the patience to help him through it ;-)
ReplyDeleteAgain you've written a fabulous chapter. Thank you Night :-)
Be well, much love and peace and healing to you all.
Hey Night!
ReplyDeleteGreat chapter. Getting help from the trolls... the D&D player inside of me wants to tell Aneris to burn them to the ground to be sure they wont heal, before they try to eat you and your army! D&D has such prejudice against monster races... Love it.
Kym