tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3486751869648447879.post3932052548287163273..comments2023-06-26T11:24:06.038-04:00Comments on Night Tempest: Welcome to the Dark Side: Knox and Isaac Chapter 6NightTempesthttp://www.blogger.com/profile/04160344739434664109noreply@blogger.comBlogger39125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3486751869648447879.post-39679605446528796442012-11-03T19:53:30.436-04:002012-11-03T19:53:30.436-04:00Thank you Night, I absolutely loved this! Can'...Thank you Night, I absolutely loved this! Can't wait for the finale, though I'm sad it's the end of Knox and Isaac's story.<br /><br />I didn't think there was anything fluffy about this. It seems obvious to me that Knox would respond very differently to his mate, especially having repressed his feelings towards and about Isaac for such a long time. And also obvious that he wouldn't go hardcore BDSM when they had only just got together, introducing him to it gradually. I loved Cade and Micah starting to sort themselves out as well. I can understand Micah's need for closure, just hope it doesn't put them in danger :/<br /><br />Mo xYanxfan24noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3486751869648447879.post-10261014746444101022012-11-03T10:19:47.788-04:002012-11-03T10:19:47.788-04:00I may be crazy... But I'm getting a Cage& ...I may be crazy... But I'm getting a Cage& Nova vibe..... ;)<br /><br />I'd LOVE to see how that would play out!!Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3486751869648447879.post-44930927996760708892012-11-03T01:10:08.076-04:002012-11-03T01:10:08.076-04:00You never cease to amaze me...I am really glad you...You never cease to amaze me...I am really glad you chose to go on and address these major things. I didn't think it should end before micah and cade found out about them (though we knew micah knew already). I really thing the cade Micah stuff was necessary too. They were little by little, not resembling the characters we fell in love with. You did a great job of expressing through their conversation, what was behind that and showing character development. I only saw the person before me comment that someone had said it was fluffy...I didn't go to see the source of that comment but I'll weigh in anyhow. I think that Knox was bound to be this way with Isaac. It was building for years as he acted the only way he could to deal with Isaac before he could claim him. I think it is sweet that Izzy can turn this tough guy into a pile of mush. Though, I would like to see the tough Knox show himself too. I think he'll get a chance to with Cade, b/c though he seemed to accept the fact that Knox did care all those years about their son and that Micah was right about it going the way it had to for them both to come to the relationship ready for each other, I still think he wants to kick knox's ass. I'd LOVE to see them go a round or two. I like how Knox is different with Isaac than he was with his previous lovers. Knox never gave a shit, I'm sure, whether other lovers were comfortable with what he did to them. His caring how Izzy felt about the belt and clearly easing him into his lifestyle, shows how much he loves him. If he were treating Isaac like he did other lovers, then I'd have to worry about the relationship being special.<br /><br />My only question is why wouldn't Knox have known what to do about Izzy beginning his change? He didn't seem to recognize it and when he did, he thought he was dead and forgot he needed to bring him back? That didn't make sense to me. I look forward to Cage eating humble pie when Izzy wakes up. I love it b/c he is just what I picture Rowe was like at his age. Also, why did Nan never mention Jaska being her mate to Izzy? unless she did and I can't remember. Do mates tend to recognize one another early on in a case where they grow up together? is it just that they don't understand what they feel toward that person? <br /><br />Lookin forward to the rest. <br />CanndAnonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3486751869648447879.post-81421361569087657442012-11-02T22:23:17.010-04:002012-11-02T22:23:17.010-04:00Can't wait to read the next chapter. I am a fa...Can't wait to read the next chapter. I am a fan of all your stories.Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08868580061499597725noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3486751869648447879.post-46998447119903314892012-11-02T19:04:24.347-04:002012-11-02T19:04:24.347-04:00Wanted to comment that I am still adoring this ser...Wanted to comment that I am still adoring this series! <br /><br />In regards to the comment that this is fluffy - I don't see it. I just see some great character development. I took this all as that vampires are supposed to be rather intense, yes? Whatever they're feeling they'll feel it in spades. So, I'd expect a dramatic shift in Knox's attitude. <br /><br />I, for one, love seeing this side of Knox. And I love Isaac standing up for himself. And, oh my gosh, when he took Knox I was salivating. :) Hot, hot, hot!<br /><br />I am a fan of "BDSM-lite", so I am finding what I read as just the right temperature.<br /><br />Again, just my humble opinion.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3486751869648447879.post-1125242101633844932012-11-02T13:16:51.147-04:002012-11-02T13:16:51.147-04:00I really enjoyed this chapter. I have always said...I really enjoyed this chapter. I have always said that your stories mesh so well together in the universe you have created. It is always amazing to see what is going to happen next and who is going to pop into say hey. I also feel compelled to tell you that the whole Cade/Micah thing was perfectly done. They have always had that borderline roughness and I am certain it comes out for them every now and again. We just happen to be peekin' in the window this time. I will tell you the same thing I tell Tucker all the time. I am so biased at this point that it is silly for me to tell you how much I love your writing. I can't wait to see what happens next with this story and everything else you write. Watching your evolution as a writer has been fun like watching my Pokemon change into new characters. It shall be fun to see what comes. Also, after reading many of your stories, laughter has been high on my list of to dos. Dear goddess your stories are funny! Carriehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05430247890960979822noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3486751869648447879.post-63683214841943783042012-11-02T10:12:41.491-04:002012-11-02T10:12:41.491-04:00Amazing chapter as always! I can't wait to see...Amazing chapter as always! I can't wait to see what happens next, the change, the confrontations, the funeral. I'm sad it's going to end, but I'm so happy to see how everything progresses. Now, to comment on the anonymous commenters comments (try saying that 3 times fast). I agree that the way you write has changed. It just keeps getting better and better! I have been reading your stories since you started on Lit. Cade was great; but I can see your growth as a writer. Now your character development is so much deeper. Every story you do it feels like I know the characters better and better; and you are able to give bits of their history and thoughts without feeling forced or contrived. I don't think the characters are too "fluffy" either. They are in love; it is a love story. Yeah, it's hot and there is amazing sex, but it's basically about 2 people (or vampires) being in love and overcoming drama and obstacles to find true love. It it wasn't fluffy in the end, no matter how well it was written, I wouldn't want to read it. Who wants to read a love story without a "fluffy" ending. This is fiction, it has drama and pain, but in the end it is sort of sappy and long dramatic talks about love, then hot make up sex, and we love it. It is just a little tiny escape from the realities and the daily grind of life. As for the characters changing, I guess I don't see that a lot, but don't we all change as time goes on? I know I'm not the same person I was 5 years ago, or even last year. That is part of human nature to grow, and adapt, and change. I like that Knox didn't go hard core BDSM on Iz right off the bat. He is trying to show his mate love and ease him into the life. I definately didn't think it was light hearted or silly. They are trying to learn each other and learn how to be a couple. That by definition takes change and compramise from both people. And as for Rowe being different, he's just growing up, he used to be sort of a spoiled brat in Cade. He is a mated prince with responsibilities and fatherhood on the horizon; those things change people, but he is still the same basic person. And I still get surprised with your stories quite frequently. When we first learned about Izzy's likeness for stockings and silk panties I was surprised all right and I didn't know if I was going to like it, but now I think it's hot as hell. I was surprised last chapter with how Micah delt with Cade, but I loved it. <br />Night, I think all of your stories are amazing and I know that constructive criticism can be helpful, I just don't want you to ever think those who are criticizing are the majority. Please keep writing these wonderful stories and we will keep greedily loving them and always begging for more. And now that I feel like I have sufficiently defended your honor and wasted an ungodly amount of time at work I will bid you all adieu.littlelizziehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17795702812775258905noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3486751869648447879.post-57561834924299284812012-11-02T01:06:19.844-04:002012-11-02T01:06:19.844-04:00I don't want this story to end but i want to r...I don't want this story to end but i want to read Blaze storyAnonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3486751869648447879.post-43843288503816975872012-11-02T00:59:57.754-04:002012-11-02T00:59:57.754-04:00Damn that was ...... i don't even have words d...Damn that was ...... i don't even have words damnAnonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3486751869648447879.post-9981095781944909372012-11-01T22:51:49.104-04:002012-11-01T22:51:49.104-04:00I loved everything about this. The Cade/Micah sce...I loved everything about this. The Cade/Micah scenes were powerful and moving and had me shedding a couple of tears. Isaac and Knox were as hot as always. I just had a feeling Isaac would start his turn at just the wrong time. It's just the way this story has been. <br /><br />As for Micah going to say goodbye to his father, I understand why he needs to go and think he should. A lot depends on how he wants to do it and if he wants to connect with the rest of his family. There are always cosmetic ways of aging yourself, especially if you don't get too close. If he just wants a final private farewell with his father, that could probably be arranged without the rest of the family. I love this series and will be sad if, and when it all comes to a close. I really would like to see Rowe and Dan as parents. <br /><br /><br /><br /><br />AvidReadrhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02114995430907573858noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3486751869648447879.post-56702361322695605872012-11-01T16:00:41.917-04:002012-11-01T16:00:41.917-04:00For some unexplained reason this story didn't ...For some unexplained reason this story didn't up in my blog list or I would've read it last night. Oh well.<br />This chapter was really good in a lot of ways, but it does feel like the beginning of the end with the mated couples working things out between themselves. I hope you continue Dan and Rowe's steps into parenthood in upcoming stories because the thought of Dan and Rowe as fathers trying to deal with a new baby? Omigod! So funny!<br />I completely forgot that vamps have to die to come back. Poor Knox having to watch that, but maybe this will make things better between Izzy and Cage. I am so excited to get to read about the turning because the end of it when Izzy needs his mate is going to be hot.<br />And Cade and Micah- I see nothing good coming out of going to the funeral, but it sure makes a perfect reason for them to return to the compound in time for the turn. Yeah, go to a memorial service for a man who shut you out of his life or watch your son come back as a vampire? Hmm, which one should I choose?<br />I don't want to get into what other people think or try to guess intent, but the biggest difference I see with this story as compared to the others is that the vamps are mostly at peace. They are still fighting the war against Rush but it is one dealer at a time in comparison to an all-out battle. There are no big baddies that they have to run off and kill like they did with Damon and Thomas in Cade or Anton and Thierry in Dan and Rowe. If you were to take all the intense aggression out of the former, they would be much like Knox and Izzy. Just my two cents.<br />Thanks Night for all you do for us. Working, getting sick over the summer and real life, and you still find time to crank out excellent stories like this series, Telija, Heart and Shermin Heights. I can't wait until you get published. You will do good, believe me.Cliffgirlhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13190642812066785364noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3486751869648447879.post-29340505881617137812012-11-01T16:00:27.680-04:002012-11-01T16:00:27.680-04:00I am worried about the funeral, would it be too da...I am worried about the funeral, would it be too dangerous to go ?Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3486751869648447879.post-53352046448781807462012-11-01T08:04:25.258-04:002012-11-01T08:04:25.258-04:00I was hoping Isaac would turn beffore the Dads got...I was hoping Isaac would turn beffore the Dads got back. Good timing! :o) LOVING THIS STORY AS ALWAYS!! Good luck with "Cade"!pathttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10045750647599760259noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3486751869648447879.post-32636329965158641332012-11-01T07:06:10.199-04:002012-11-01T07:06:10.199-04:00And again. Stop trying to apologize. I understand ...And again. Stop trying to apologize. I understand now. Thanks. NightTempesthttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04160344739434664109noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3486751869648447879.post-12030144806601073032012-11-01T06:19:41.556-04:002012-11-01T06:19:41.556-04:00pls dont listen to mister or miss fluffy here and ...pls dont listen to mister or miss fluffy here and dont get upset for some ungrateful people, ur stories are sooo good and u always make my day when i find out that u posted one so plsss keep it up girl and we all appreciate ur worksss cuz theyr just perfect <br />ReemAnonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3486751869648447879.post-67382218450814220062012-11-01T05:36:34.073-04:002012-11-01T05:36:34.073-04:00Awesome. Can't wait for Isaac's turning an...Awesome. Can't wait for Isaac's turning and heart for trade! <br />ChrisUnknownhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14598870205672743897noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3486751869648447879.post-4692553979569165342012-11-01T05:03:28.170-04:002012-11-01T05:03:28.170-04:00I think that most of it is word choice. " Cad...I think that most of it is word choice. " Cade looked down, holding Micah’s attention with his loving stare.", or the paragraphs right before Knox puts the chastity belt on Isaac. They're still written well, but they're just so... gushy. I feel like there's less plot, and more gush-mush-kissy stuff. <br />I should have worded the no surprises part better. I just meant that the story is very predictable, especially going with the style of writing that you have been following. <br />As for what I was expecting.... I don't really know. Something darker, I think. Intense BDSM play as Knox shows Isaac what he's about. I know there was some, but it was fairly mild. I didn't expect for them to get so lovey dovey so quickly. It almost seems light-hearted. I get the idea that it's supposed to be dark and brooding, but the way it reads is more.. silly. <br />The best example of it in this chapter is when Nan and Jaska are talking to Rowe. The way they talk makes it hard for me to see them as the characters you've drawn them out to be. Especially Rowe. "Oh pish posh." I imagined him throwing out his hip and swishing his hand around, an action I couldn't have ever seen him doing previously, unless in jest. <br />I realize that most of this is my own preferences, so sorry for being the negative comment bitch. And if I'm completely wrong in evaluating your characters, I invite you to tell me to kiss my own swishy ass down to hell. Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3486751869648447879.post-58380149197861572052012-11-01T03:31:10.264-04:002012-11-01T03:31:10.264-04:00One word MORE!!!
willieoneOne word MORE!!! <br /><br /><br />willieoneAnonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3486751869648447879.post-29001258798433297072012-11-01T02:13:30.214-04:002012-11-01T02:13:30.214-04:00Oh my goodness this chapter was great keep up the ...Oh my goodness this chapter was great keep up the good work night. Can't wait for the next chapter it's going to be awesomeAnonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05231889700039182792noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3486751869648447879.post-10399685579723128022012-11-01T02:09:52.792-04:002012-11-01T02:09:52.792-04:00Again. I'm left in the dark on what you mean o...Again. I'm left in the dark on what you mean or a means to fix this. What disappoints you? What were you expecting? What do you mean by no surprises? Value commenting is really starting to get to me. I dont<br /> Get angry that you don't like it, but if you take the time to write such a long comment, could you avoid beating around the bush so I can get some real feedback? Fluffy. Got it. But what? Where the rest is concerned. NightTempesthttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04160344739434664109noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3486751869648447879.post-86951921574757111552012-11-01T00:24:02.380-04:002012-11-01T00:24:02.380-04:00I feel like your writing has changed... I don'...I feel like your writing has changed... I don't know if it actually has, or if I'm remembering wrong, but I feel like Dan and Rowe and now this story have such a different feel than Cade's and Micah's story. Your writing is still very good, but I feel like there's no surprise anymore. Everything's so... fluffy. I don't mean action or sex wise, cause there's nothing fluffy about Knox, but in how everything turns out. I don't worry about the characters because I know that everybody's going to be crying and holding each other at the end. I was so excited for Knox and Isaac's story, and I can't help but be a little disappointed. I mean, EVERYBODY cries. And it kind of reads like a soap opera. Lots of drama, and then the characters react to whatever happens by having a dramatic talk and then they cry more. <br />I'm sorry, I hate writing reviews like this. I know that you have a life and that it doesn't revolve around writing these stories.<br />This has just been bugging me for a while, so I felt like I should finally say something.<br />I'm still a faithful follower though, I check your blog everyday and still get SO excited whenever you post something. Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3486751869648447879.post-17495871276091224092012-10-31T23:57:05.932-04:002012-10-31T23:57:05.932-04:00Thank you, thank you, thank you!!! Great chapter!!...Thank you, thank you, thank you!!! Great chapter!!Terrenoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3486751869648447879.post-81529595775396482302012-10-31T23:29:14.280-04:002012-10-31T23:29:14.280-04:00Another awesome chapter Night!!
Really loved this ...Another awesome chapter Night!!<br />Really loved this one!! Cade and Micah are my fav and seeing them fight was hard, soooooooo glad they are back on track.<br />I was wondering when Isaac would turn,lol<br />Perfect time, maybe it would help him and Cage fix their friendship.<br />Can't wait for the finale.<br />:)hk47enclavehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01035326328305980501noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3486751869648447879.post-8717288934268475162012-10-31T21:06:18.594-04:002012-10-31T21:06:18.594-04:00You know, they can make remarkable make up job now...You know, they can make remarkable make up job now a days, make people look older... Maybe enough for a funeral?Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3486751869648447879.post-79966761853627886962012-10-31T20:56:04.604-04:002012-10-31T20:56:04.604-04:00Nice cliffhanger. I've been waiting for Issac&...Nice cliffhanger. I've been waiting for Issac's turn. I will be one of many who will be sad when this story ends. If only this could be an endless serial! :)<br /><br />Lots of love!!Mann Ramblngsnoreply@blogger.com