tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3486751869648447879.post3814621156465386413..comments2023-06-26T11:24:06.038-04:00Comments on Night Tempest: Welcome to the Dark Side: Shelter Me: Part 3NightTempesthttp://www.blogger.com/profile/04160344739434664109noreply@blogger.comBlogger15125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3486751869648447879.post-48647113609919806632013-08-29T01:41:52.773-04:002013-08-29T01:41:52.773-04:00This chapter was perfect. Especially loved when Gr...This chapter was perfect. Especially loved when Greg was taking in his mate's fear (hiding behind a chair, begging not to be raped and killed) and interpretation of the situation. Then there was the resignation...<br />Can't wait til the end of this week!! You make my day every time you post!Relena Lnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3486751869648447879.post-37262234955733207882013-08-22T12:21:33.618-04:002013-08-22T12:21:33.618-04:00I never fought back the tears. I let them pour! Wh...I never fought back the tears. I let them pour! What a chapter. So beautiful and so dark as well. Both of Trey's an Greg's stories are full of emotions I couldn't stop crying! Thank you!Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17882633342331300169noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3486751869648447879.post-85227398412897753702013-08-20T22:58:30.232-04:002013-08-20T22:58:30.232-04:00How do you do it Night!
Every time I read somethin...How do you do it Night!<br />Every time I read something new from you,my expectations are always surpassed!<br />This is so damn good.<br />Can't wait for more.<br />:)<br /><br />Mikhk47enclavehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01035326328305980501noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3486751869648447879.post-24943493671763536272013-08-20T12:36:50.300-04:002013-08-20T12:36:50.300-04:00OMG, another amazing chapter. Sooo Good! Beautif...OMG, another amazing chapter. Sooo Good! Beautifully written and full of emotions. Well done!<br /><br />And love your playlist for this chapter! Even after all these years I still love Til Tuesday! I bought the album when it first came out, way back when they were called records not vinyl, lol! Yeah, I’m showing my age :).<br />Nicolenoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3486751869648447879.post-74091003969598776192013-08-20T12:12:32.530-04:002013-08-20T12:12:32.530-04:00OH, Wizard of Words! **bowing low** You can write...OH, Wizard of Words! **bowing low** You can write a rant like nobody's business!! Alex/Trey laid it all out there..and Greg's telling of his turning point? Awesome. I love this story (as if you didn't already know). :o)pathttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10045750647599760259noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3486751869648447879.post-81496503103234719912013-08-20T10:04:41.209-04:002013-08-20T10:04:41.209-04:00Ok, so you've been a great storyteller for a l...Ok, so you've been a great storyteller for a looong time. Reading this, I realized that you have - after tons of practice and hours of creative heartache - become a true author (baby's growing up). Wanna know how I know? It's all in the realism and beauty of a single sentence from this part:<br /><br />"Jade green eyes ringed in dark brown took Greg’s breath away, reminding him of a summer leaf crippling under the chilly hand of fall."<br /><br />Beautifully written. That one sentence made my creative day; the visual made my heart sing.<br /><br />Congratulations, Night!<br /><br />~ColemanAnonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3486751869648447879.post-17755101297679871532013-08-20T06:30:54.073-04:002013-08-20T06:30:54.073-04:00- Faolin :-P - Faolin :-P Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3486751869648447879.post-73332679947219135012013-08-20T06:29:43.355-04:002013-08-20T06:29:43.355-04:00Wow, very emotional,loved it! Thanks too for makin...Wow, very emotional,loved it! Thanks too for making it nice and long! Can't wait for more!Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3486751869648447879.post-27715700308646329952013-08-19T23:37:26.679-04:002013-08-19T23:37:26.679-04:00You don't need feed back you're perfect ev...You don't need feed back you're perfect everything you write is amazing. I loved this Krystelhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12414474225702066368noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3486751869648447879.post-12871215454089424232013-08-19T20:41:56.788-04:002013-08-19T20:41:56.788-04:00Amazing chapter!!! Can't wait for the next c...Amazing chapter!!! Can't wait for the next chapter/installment!!!!BrattyLisahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08193622466684517429noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3486751869648447879.post-4258893067028156642013-08-19T20:00:55.727-04:002013-08-19T20:00:55.727-04:00Oops. Elaina. Darn spell check.Oops. Elaina. Darn spell check.Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12524832205873884207noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3486751869648447879.post-84316159188292188012013-08-19T19:56:39.910-04:002013-08-19T19:56:39.910-04:00Breathless, fighting back the tears. Smothering un...Breathless, fighting back the tears. Smothering under the effects of crippling emotions. And you leave me like this? As much as I love you, your killing me. LOL<br />Seriously though, this was an unbelievably amazing chapter. How you can evoke so much emotion in one chapter boggles my mind. (Not that my poor feeble mind need much help in that department!)<br />As always thank you for this incredible journey your are leading us on. I wait on the edge of my seat for the next chapter. <br />At least Friday is not that far away and i get my fix of you and Elaine with Flash Friday.<br />Thank you again.Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12524832205873884207noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3486751869648447879.post-30784804764267978292013-08-19T16:18:37.924-04:002013-08-19T16:18:37.924-04:00This chapter was truly amazing! When Greg recounte...This chapter was truly amazing! When Greg recounted the story of the homeless guy I almost cried! Can't wait for the next chapter!!!Jannanoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3486751869648447879.post-45545306222767327932013-08-19T15:41:31.150-04:002013-08-19T15:41:31.150-04:00That what an awesome chapter Night. Like always yo...That what an awesome chapter Night. Like always you know how to keep us hooked with your cliffhanger. Where is a time machine when you need one? <br />Kym Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3486751869648447879.post-74209445087569029992013-08-19T12:43:12.093-04:002013-08-19T12:43:12.093-04:00As the saying goes, shit's about to get real! ...As the saying goes, shit's about to get real! Loving this as always. This chapter is great. Lots of emotions, lots of stuff happening. Can't wait to see what happens next :)Mazurihttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00737625386129501643noreply@blogger.com