tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3486751869648447879.post2616791297756604792..comments2023-06-26T11:24:06.038-04:00Comments on Night Tempest: Welcome to the Dark Side: Flash Fiction Friday! The Great Mage (Week 11)NightTempesthttp://www.blogger.com/profile/04160344739434664109noreply@blogger.comBlogger4125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3486751869648447879.post-17833743823176400492013-09-28T21:49:47.036-04:002013-09-28T21:49:47.036-04:00awww, nice that they are together again.
Loving th...awww, nice that they are together again.<br />Loving these chapters Night!<br />I can feel the energy in the story, seems like big things are coming soon. :D<br />Have a great weekend. :)<br />hk47enclavehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01035326328305980501noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3486751869648447879.post-42682097996167148512013-09-27T12:44:11.259-04:002013-09-27T12:44:11.259-04:00Surprisingly, Fia was my favorite part of this fun...Surprisingly, Fia was my favorite part of this fun chapter. Just the thought of a fiery little horse, pissed but hunkered down on a huge dragon to escape all the water, cracks me up. I can also imagine her "oHELLno"ness in the face of a three-headed hellhound. Nice touch.<br /><br />A detail that threw me, tho: the chapter says the black dragon was watching Aneris in the window when he looked outside. I expected him to tell Seth that Aneris was awake, or for Seth to notice where the dragon was looking, see his man in the window, and haul ass up to him. Maybe I read it wrong.geemeedeehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17631213265685729492noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3486751869648447879.post-66771449721515591192013-09-27T05:22:11.823-04:002013-09-27T05:22:11.823-04:00Aww, Seth's affection is so sweet... The myth ...Aww, Seth's affection is so sweet... The myth of Cerberus fits really well! Having come back from the dead n all... Can't wait for my next Friday fix! <br /><br />- Faolin Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3486751869648447879.post-27806063703666386222013-09-27T00:08:03.487-04:002013-09-27T00:08:03.487-04:00night you are one evil lady :-D for leaving us the...night you are one evil lady :-D for leaving us theses cliffhangers but I love this story I'm anticipate Fridays every week now.<br /><br />kayla Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03373145087384423642noreply@blogger.com